What is one idea, suggestion, or approach from a group member that improved your paragraph or changed the way you thought about the argument? Explain how it helped you.

 Prompt Response: One important thing Nayla kept suggesting and reminding us to do was really explain why our evidence is relevant. She noticed that we would sometimes just give reasons so support our claim and the not explain them thoroughly. This was really helpful because it was easy to get distracted just looking for evidence to use. Her reminders also helped all of us start remembering to do this better to the point where she didn't need to remind us anymore. Overall, her constant reminders helped us remember and reinforce the idea that having evidence means nothing and is pointless if you can't and don't explain it.

Summary: In class today we did some vocabulary exercises.

Reflection: When we were writing down definitions, there were some that I already knew but a lot that I was unfamiliar with. Once we started practicing trying to find where certain words go in a sentence, it helped improve my memory of what words meant what and how to use them properly.

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